I would write this: Hi!!! If I were you, I would be sooooo thankful of Club Penguin and ALL THE PENGUINS IN THE WORLD! (Vitrual penguins) Everyone helped build your new shelters, playgrounds, and schools, we helped your health, and saved animals all over the world; including the animals in your country, oh, and plants! I feel good, too because I donated my virtual coins so that Club Penguin could donate money to build schools, playgrounds, and shelters,and help plants, animals, and medical help!I hope you're happy because eveen I am happy!!!!!!!
I would write this: Hi!!! If I were you, I would be sooooo thankful of Club Penguin and ALL THE PENGUINS IN THE WORLD! (Vitrual penguins) Everyone helped build your new shelters, playgrounds, and schools, we helped your health, and saved animals all over the world; including the animals in your country, oh, and plants! I feel good, too because I donated my virtual coins so that Club Penguin could donate money to build schools, playgrounds, and shelters,and help plants, animals, and medical help!I hope you're happy because eveen I am happy!!!!!!!